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November 21, 2013, 11:03:55 AM
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Offline Wendy van Zyl

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A beautiful girl
« on: November 21, 2013, 11:03:55 AM »
Hello, my first post here. I am posting to see what image link is all about. Regards Wendy

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November 21, 2013, 11:16:45 AM
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Re: A beautiful girl
« Reply #1 on: November 21, 2013, 11:16:45 AM »
Your focus on the yes are spot on. For me the highlights on the neck and face might a bit on the light side.

Thanks for posting.

I am looking forward to see your work.

Capture it when you see it ... it is a mere moment in time and will never come by again.
LPSSA

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November 21, 2013, 11:30:02 AM
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Re: A beautiful girl
« Reply #2 on: November 21, 2013, 11:30:02 AM »
Studio work is not my forte at all so I'll leave that to the experts.
It is just that something in the background, lamp or bed post, that detracts.

Welcome :)

November 21, 2013, 04:04:50 PM
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Offline Pierre Joubert

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Re: A beautiful girl
« Reply #3 on: November 21, 2013, 04:04:50 PM »
Welcome to the forum Wendy

What is Image Link all about? You should be able to learn the art of photography from the numerous websites and forums on the internet. So why Image Link?

Why do I show my images to my friends and family (or post them on Facebook)? The true answer will reveal something about myself more than it will reveal something about my photographic skills:
  • To share information about an experience (our holiday, our new puppy, etc.) or perhaps
  • To receive psychological strokes. We all need some form of stroking from time to time...

So why will I expose my skills here? To be part of a mutual beneficial relationship that will enable me to:
  • receive honest feedback and then to go out and improve my photographic skills
  • give honest feedback to fellow photographers so they could improve their photographic skills

Think that it should be easy to judge someone else's work? I am still learning...  (more about this later)

A beautiful girl

The model communicates excellently with the viewer - honest, peaceful, seductive
Technical Aspects - High contrast image in monochrome with tones from black to white (the neck area could be a bit overexposed). The background could be disturbing but contribute to the shady mood of the image.
"Where your focus goes, energy flows"


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June 26, 2017, 08:47:11 AM
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Re: A beautiful girl
« Reply #4 on: June 26, 2017, 08:47:11 AM »
Studio work is not my forte at all so I'll leave that to the expert review of testo max. It is just that something in the background, lamp or bed post, that detracts.

Welcome :)

Great pic, I think the lighting is perfect.
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